Saturday, September 15, 2007

I can count to 70. (Five Fourteen)

Topic: Zach: Based on Hemingway's six word story, create five separate fourteen word stories.

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I’ll need one roll of cookie dough, twelve razor blades, and an October day.

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She found a “read me” file, opened it, and realized how big it was.

After using the sword, he understood how many would die because of his mistake.

The monkey sang; she hit the monkey. The monkey wrote; she fed the monkey.

5 comments:

Pete said...

My fav, because I know the story is the Read Me File story. It's never not funny, although I know there are multiple meanings.

I like yours because it's so easy to read ne and go in so many different directions; use them as perfect stepping-off points for elborations...

No criticisms. At all.

Aharon said...

YES the monkeys write, they write FOREVER


I also really like the read Me file story, pete right alot you came do with that one.

Zach L said...

Definitely, the "read me" bit -- I just love snarky wit and subtle puns, or better yet, the illusion of innuendo when there's really just honesty :D

Tanqueray said...

I thought all of your guys' comments needed to be 14 words as well.

Tanqueray said...

Thanks!