Friday, September 14, 2007

14 Stories - Aharon

Second Coming


At last, I am Come... Where is everybody? When the hell did they leave!?


Two fictions meet. Problems for one. The other tells fables based on true stories.


One thousand Monkeys, on one thousand typewriters, for a thousand years. I was one.


The professor died, leaving a paper trail. Will we ever see the light again.


College Girl. One to many drinks. Guy wakes up in a tub, No kidney.

3 comments:

Pete said...

"... I am Come."

Hmmmmm : )


my fav, hands down:

"Two fictions meet. Problems for one. The other tells fables based on true stories."

Straight up channeling Niel Gaiman.

Which makes me think...

Aharon said...

what does it make you think

Tanqueray said...

[One thousand Monkeys, on one thousand typewriters, for a thousand years. I was one.]

[The professor died, leaving a paper trail. Will we ever see the light again.]

I liked both of those the most out of the five options.

I enjoyed the monkey story because I had a similar idea: incorporate the monkey them. Admittedly, I like your idea more though. With our powers combined I may have ended your story with, "Still no words" instead of, ["I was one."] Thus, the item would look like this:

[One thousand Monkeys, on one thousand typewriters, for a thousand years. Still no stories.]

Moving on to the professor one, I appreciated that the secret was left open for the reader. What did we lose? Was it science fiction? Would the story be of the genre variety or more mainstream? Who knows, but I'd like to.