I everyone Aharon here. I would like to say welcome to all the newcomers not only steph and Tammy, but also Zach. I'm really glad to have you guys here and I want to say thanx to all of you. Having others involved keeps me involved, also it's great because we see alot of variety.
that being said, I should make it clear that I am here to challenge myself as a writer, as, I assume, are all of you. I would ask that when I do make a post that anyone who reads it feel free to tell me anything positive, but please feel free to tell me if there is something about my writing that is problematic. From now on I will include a memo of the purpose of the short story, and questions I would like you as readers to ask as you read it. I look forward to criticism.
Beyond that if anyone has a preffered style of critique that you would like me to employ (focus on the positive, or on the negative) please comment back and let me know. I ask because I would not want to be too negative with someone who handles positive feedback better, but mostly because I don't want to just say what I liked to someone who is trying to iron out the wrinkles in their writing.
I look forward to hearing from you guys.